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Topic: Adventages of learning English.
Many people don't like English beacuse they find it's very difficult. But I think you'll want to study it beacuse of the following reasons. First of all, English is an international language. Over 2 billions people in the world use it to communicate .Learning English helps us have more friends. Second, the more foreign companies want to invest to Vietnam, the more chances to work with high benefit. English is one of necessary standards for anyone who wants work there. English really can change your life. Third, learning English helps us to improve our knowledge of every feld in over the world and we'll have access to a great wealth of entertaiment ang will be able to have a great culture understanding. Last but not least, English music is very nice and it will help you relax after stressful life. English is an important role in our life. We should study it more and more to secceed in our life.
Topic: Advantages of learning English.
Many people don't like English because they find it very difficult. But I think you'll want to study it because of the following reasons. First of all, English is an international language. Over 2 billions people in the world use it to communicate .Learning English helps us have more friends. Second, the more foreign companies want to invest to Vietnam, the more chances to work with high benefit. English is one of necessary standards for anyone who wants work there. English really can change your life. Third, learning English helps us improve our knowledge of every feld in over the world and we'll have access to a great wealth of entertaiment ang will be able to have a great culture understanding. Last but not least, English music is very nice and it will help you relax after stressful life. English is an important role in our life. We should study it more and more to secceed in our life.